Something I learned about writing a procedure is where we have to make good instructions by having numbered steps.
Something I would like to do better is make them more interesting by putting more adverbs in it.
Here is my writing.
How to make delicious jelly pops.
What do you need?
- Jelly crystals
- Party cups
- Boiling water (1 cup)
- Cold water (½ cup)
- Fruit sticks
- Measuring cup
1.Prepare the party cups upright on a flat surface.
2.Carefully pour 1 cup of boiling water into a jug or bowl WARNING ask adult to help.
3.Carefully tip jelly crystals into a jug or bowl.
4.Quickly dissolve jelly crystals with a whisk.
5.Add ½ cup of cold water into a jug or bowl.
6.Leave it for 15 minutes to set.
7.Carefully pour the jelly into the party cups.
8.Carefully add the fruit sticks into the jelly.
9.Slowly put the jelly into the freezer.
10.Carefully dip your jelly pops into some boiling water.
11.Then carefully take them out.
12.Enjoy your jelly pops.